IS A GOOD JAIL ROMANCE STORY STILL HOT TO WRITE ABOUT?
70COPS PUT HER IN JAIL LOCKED UNIVERSE COUNTY JAIL, BUT SHE SAW THE INSIDE OF "HIS" BATHROOM!
Novelist Sometimes Pines For Doctor's Son Who Got her sent To Jail!
There is a novel running around the net online called LOCKED UNIVERSE COUNTY JAIL and it's pretty interesting and let's us look into how it is to be in jail for a petty reason like DUI or petty theft or just loving someone and cheating with them on a boyfriend of ten years who ends up calling the cops on Christmas Eve and cops show up at the lovers house and arrests the woman having the affair and they take her to Twin Towers Jail and we see first hand what it is like in when you are pulled from your lover, a man you thought would stand by you, but snivels in the corner and puts his tail between his legs. Well, he was 8 years younger than me and I was hating my relationship with some guy I'd been with for ten years and all that guy thought of was sex.
As an example, take Leslie Siegel's novel "Locked Universe County Jail" which was once a big hit with bloglist types and is rated very high in google engines so check it out internet generation X's generation types so just type in "LOCKED UNIVERSE COUNTY JAIL"! You will get to the full version of life behind bars for loving a doctor's son and cheating on the electrician boyfriend, so it is not so far from the truth, or the tree. It's hard to say if infidelity writing is worth it anymore. People, couples , wives and husbands split and come back and become pals. In the novel Locked Universe County Jail the antagonist TJ, puts his girlfriend in jail for basically cheating him after years of being together. Now they are the best of friends again after a 4 year absence from each other, but the character of Blondie has changed drastically and she starts to see, after a few months, that TJ is turning back into the bully she ran from into the arms of a virgin
He was the last, their baby, and I didn’t put it passed him that he had some emotional problems whirling around his brain. Several health problems surfaced, Asthma and Sleep Apnea among others. His right wrist was broken and painful to him. He was vague about how it had happened. He’d had heavy dental work done, and was also mysterious about that and the strange long-winded medications I found stashed around his room weren’t comforting. I didn’t miss the small scar near the eye that sometimes resembled a ‘cat wink’ when it closed slowly every now and then. But I didn’t care. I wanted to be with him no matter what was wrong with him, or what the repercussions would be down the line. He just made me feel so good. I don’t know exactly why, but it may have been a combination of our loneliness and chemistry that threw the trump card.
But there was a certain paranoia he emulated in regards to his parents and family right from the start, and I was seeing it in full force now. He had a fierce almost crazed desire to preserve and protect his privacy, which probably contributed to his already heavy paranoia. His room reflected this and was virtually sealed off from the rest of the house. He even had a carbon-ionized fan that re-circulated the air. He had a thing about it and even used it at the medical lab he had worked at for the past few years. My ears would actually pop when I opened the door to his bathroom.
Peeing in his bathroom was like trying to relieve yourself in a speeding aircraft experiencing heavy turbulence, because I could hear his parents talking in the kitchen, their shrilly voices shooting out like jet engines, totally closing off my bladder. There was also another door leading to the outer home where his parent’s quarters were. Sometimes I’d open Albert’s sealed portal and spot the other door wide open to his parent’s domain like a cavern. I would have to tiptoe over to it, sometimes naked, and quietly close it. They knew we were there, even heard us many times when things got a little out of control. I sensed his father thinking, “That’s my boy!” But his mother was a whole different ball game. She was probably saying, “Oh, she’s taking away my little boy, that Pariah!” She was suspicious of me, I could tell right away when I had dinner with them. God knows I’d not told his parents or him for that matter, the whole story about me.
But you will have to read the story to get the full effect of this connection and how it all connected and how it was in that county jail plus how I learned to be a good woman, not a cheat, no matter what. Must we truth ourselves when God gives us more than 40 percent of our lives to control. Just wish God would not stand by and let me do so much self punishment. I tried to get away from the dreaded man TJ but it was so impossible. No one would believe he could be mean. He came off as a sweet, cute, adorable, guitar playing man that could fix anything from your sink to your door or anything. Even build a whole house. It was maddening. But I got through or how else would I be writing this 10 years later.
As for Albert, my doctor's son lover whom I de flowered and now is known on the net as a real person. i wrote the novel 10 years ago and it is just now breaking the surface, selling and even viraling in many areas. I have become obsessed with it coming up in video form as I tried to do with the Train hopping guide I found under a bus bench. All trouble in the end, but I keep writing. If they were not reading, I would be first page Google. Go ahead and check the link out, just put "locked universe county jail novel" in Google and you'll get my novel most probably. You can zip through or take your time. It's a great read. Have fun. I've not been in trouble since that day nor have I seen Albert the doctor's son. I wonder what he looks like now?
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I (Heather Heaton) am recommending my new ebook ("Her Letters from Prison") as a motivational resource for reading pleasure, review, contemplation, and comment. My ebook will validate your inquisitive doubts about what goes on in women’s prisons; it can justify the efforts spent toward ministries to women’s prisons; and it can be an inspirational (tell-it-like-it-is) resource for drug rehab/prevention programs. The book is non-fiction prison romance (It is what it is!); and the original letters are included as images for authenticity. You can go to http://www.heather-heaton.com and purchase “Her Letters from Prison”, Parts 1 and 2.
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I am a 34 year old college student trying to better my life, in spite of the baggage I carry from my previous life. To date, I have been quite successful in accomplishing this goal; and I will use the proceeds from the book to help support myself. My picture is posted, with my book descriptions, at Smashwords. I can be contacted using email at heatherheaton@rocketmail.com.
My recently published ebook is entitled ("Her Letters from Prison: Part 1 & Part 2", by Heather Heaton). The ebook was published at Smashwords (www.smashwords.com). A brief description of the ebook follows:
1. Breanna tells the true story of her experiences in prison through her letters to her friend Heath. This is a story of survival and a quest to make a better life. The letters describe the daily shocking events of prison life involving drugs, sex, utter devastation and humiliation, anger, hopelessness, despair, and finally happiness and hope.
2. Breanna's "truth" stands still even as the world around her trembles and burns! Bad things do happen to good people; and Breanna is the perfect example of this truth.
3. Breanna's inner strengths and principles eventually win out over the corruption and evil that surrounds her. With God's help, Breanna survives the horrible experiences of prison life and regains her self-confidence and hope for a better life.
4. "Breanna" was an inmate at Tutwiler Women's Prison from 2007 to 2009.
5. "Breanna" benefitted from women's prison ministries and the LIFE Tech-Wetumpka state-funded self-help program.
The Introduction page of the ebook follows:
Introduction:
The story you are about to read is true. Unfortunately, it’s my story; and the truth is often much more intriguing than fiction. I have had to deal with this story (this situation) for more than the past ten years. I started living out this story with all the hopes and dreams of most (if not all) young American girls; and I will finish this story by realizing most of those hopes and dreams, even though they have been interrupted for a time (in prison) that seems like time and time again. Through it all, I have managed to learn some life lessons that I hope to give to you; and I am hoping that you can pick up on these lessons earlier in life than I have done. I should have learned these lessons long ago. If I had learned these lessons long ago, I assure you that I would not have written the material you are now reading. My hope is that nobody else has to endure what I have endured learning life lessons that should be given to youngsters and adolescents early in life by the ones who truly love them. But here again, there are probably other youngsters and adolescents, much like me, who will have to learn these life lessons painfully for themselves, the hard way – by experiencing them first hand. Well, if you continue to read my story, here’s what you will experience – drugs, sex, violence, prison, utter devastation/humiliation, anger, hopelessness, despair, and finally happiness and hope!
If you don’t take me seriously and you follow in my path, you are going to experience false hope and disillusionment! You are going to experience broken trusts, by those whom you trusted most! You are going to experience pain and agony that brings you to the brink of self-destruction! You will lose your freedom! You will lose the right to think for yourself and to make your own decisions! You will lose your sense of self-worth and self-dignity! You are going to lose your ability to support yourself! You are going to lose your self-confidence! You are going to be victimized; and you can do little to avoid this! You will struggle and struggle and struggle just to get yourself back onto an even keel! But if you can ever manage to muster a tremendous mountain of stubbornness and determination, and if you can begin to think better of yourself, you will be able to recover most, but not all, of your ability to manage your own affairs while regaining some of your self-confidence and feeling of self-worth. I am just about to accomplish this in my life! Being just about able to accomplish this in my life is what has led me to (it has allowed me to) share my story with you. At first, I didn’t think I could ever share my story with anyone. But, I really don’t want you to actually share (live through) my experiences, even if you think you can handle it. Just read this story and do something positive in your own life.
Note: Names have been changed to protect each individual's privacy.
Dedication:
This work is dedicated to Valrise Bendolf (Clay County Dept. of Corrections Holding Facility), Jackie Ratliff (Kilby – Montgomery Womens’ Facility), Fawn Romie/Mr. Roberts/Gary Parsons (Life Tech) and all of Mr. Robert’s little roses that he so diligently cultivated. For all their good works, these people saved my life!
I hope that you find this ebook both interesting and helpful.
Sincerely,
Heather Heaton
heatherheaton@rocketmail.com
http://www.herlettersfromprison.com
Customer/Reader Review of “Her Letters from Prison”
Heather, ever since you first contacted me about your ebooks (and when I received them) I have been giving them traction. At least two women on my case load checked them out, (like a library card so I would get them back) and were very moved by the content. I haven’t had another problem with their behavior since they read them. So…I know they are working. They should be required reading, ordered by a Judge before women are sentenced to probation, so that they would fully understand the consequences of their behavior. The coverage by The Prison Art Coalition blog is very good news both for Heather and for those that will read her story.
They (“Her Letters from Prison: Parts 1 & 2) should be used as text books for the next Life Tech facility for Women!!! I wish I had some pull for money to build a better one. I pray for it.
Gary Parsons
Parole Officer
State of Alabama – Board of Pardons & Parole
Yo Heather, I'll keep it up, 'cause I do the same. Good writing. But what is the story about? It's sort of mish mash, mish mash, spread out ideas...? I'll have to see more. Feel free to put as much as you want on this hub page. I am happy others write the same type of stuff as me! Leslie Siegel approves of YOU!
Brenda Starkey 10 months ago
I really liked your story and blog Locked Universe County Jail and I think the jail scenes were the most exciting, even without all the hoopla of sex and drugs and rock and roll, dropping the soap, or getting beat up. There's none of those things going on, although it is implied. Nice job and good luck Leslie Siegel.